Hello and welcome back to my blog. In literacy we have been doing writing in the morning. The teacher will give us a picture and we will write about it. But there is a twist. The teacher will give the class a thing we have to put in the writing. This week it was personification. This picture was my favourite.
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Hello Kyla, it's me Mikayla and I would think it was a very good post. I also think it was a good little story, though check the first sentence, I think you mixed the word our with are. But still great job!
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